Crest Academy - Feedback Demo Release

Before you download, PLEASE READ THIS:

This I the FEEDBACK DEMO RELEASE. The game is NOT FINISHED, literally the code only has 279 lines :sob:

I am releasing this as a Feedback demo before I continue it, so I know if I should. Im not wasting time on something nobody will play.
I need ALL the feedback you can muster with an estimated ~4 minute playtime/readtime; Is the storyline good? Are there any spelling errors? Any game errors? WHATEVER it is PLEASE tell me. Email me at maskedinsomniqc@gmail.com or comment on this page.