Crest Academy - Demo Release

Before you download, PLEASE READ THIS:

This I the FEEDBACK DEMO RELEASE. The game is NOT FINISHED

I am releasing this as a Feedback demo before I continue it, so I know if I should. Im not wasting time on something nobody will play.
I need ALL the feedback you can muster with an estimated ~4+ minute playtime/read time. Is the storyline good? Are there any spelling errors? Are there any game errors? Whatever it is, please tell me. Email me at maskedinsomniqc@gmail.com or comment in the community page!